Sunday, August 16, 2009

Hmm

I posted a new poem, but I want to begin writing dialogue. For dialogue I need some genius premise which over the past 4 years I have been unable to grasp. If I sit down intending to brainstorm and decide my mind goes blank. So: if anyone reads this -- give me a sample premise and I will practice dialogue using said premise. Godspeed.

GO!

a shapely concrete discovery

controlled chaos and The Collapse
financing; bounded; commandeering; collecting
life colored corpses
vessels filled and filling
me, mine, and yours
reach into pockets deep
flow kindly into the mouth of the desperate
seek the mundane
mounds stacked
flashy, dangling
I discovered the fantasy
time travel works in one direction
forward
but backwards to make truth revealed
the whole Truth
Jean Luc -- please -- warp speed
what will be will be, so
please bring me to what will be.